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[Imaginary Coolness]

I have serious problems with this animation

Hey there, I just wanted to let you know how you can fix your animation and make it enjoyable to watch for a broader audience.

Firstly, the background didn't really suit the animation very well. The animation was somewhat sketchy, where as the background was very clean and you used gradients on that. This can look good, but in this movie it sadly didn't. It distracted from the actual character movement.

The character movement itself wasn't half bad. And by that I mean at least you didn't tween everything, you actually used frame by frame - which i like - but it all looked very stiff and unnatural. Especially the first movement.

The story itself, I don't know, I've never had that problem so perhaps i just can't really get into the story of the flash. The jokes weren't really funny though.

The style was pretty much a cross over between Eddsworld and Egoraptor, taking both negative sides from both of their styles. Along with the voice acting, which was really wannabe-egoraptor-esque. Can't really say I liked it.

Hope you'll do better on your next one.

servandovill responds:

this isnt a egoraptor or eddsword style , i took adventures time references , maybe u have no kind of issues from this kind , but u may imagine it cause almost everyone in the word had this issue, this isnt a story its a flash , a commedy theres not such of a big story here. u are expecting alot from me since this is my second submmition? i like gradients which i do , and if i dont want to put it in my characters , then its my problem , i think it blend it good , but anyways is ur comment, unnatural should be that u had never been in love, of some kind of this story. but i appreciate the comment thanks.

[Sing Boy Episode 1 Part 2]

fucking amazing

i was shocked, i cried, then i laughed my ass off.

awesome flash.

dullsworth responds:

thanks man

[DE_dust2 Outtakes]

neat

I seem to have the same problem blazer133 has though, and my computer is good enough to handle that kind of stuff. It looks like that, during the fbf animation there, you accidentally deleted a keyframe or two.

Either way, it was enjoyable but a little short for my taste. Not bad though, wish there would've been more.

WX responds:

I've looked into it and you're right. I re-exported the .swf and it works fine now. It must be some sort of weird Flash export glitch. The flash will be updated once it has been approved by admins.

Thanks.

[TheLongStory Ep.002]

Great work

Great work, really good episode. It's a little short but still nice.
I really want to know how this advances, should get interesting.

Madanimation responds:

It should! Magic Wand's part was fucking amazing!
Thanks for the review!

[TheLongStory Ep.001]

Really nice work man!

That was a great start for a great collab! I hope the other parts will be nicely made as well. The only downpoint was, I can't really imagine the story advancing too far.

Isterbandet responds:

Hey, you doubting the imagination of the LL? :)

[Don't Eat the Choco Bunny]

badass movie man

Really awesome, nice animation and a lot of comedy. Love it.

CoolDrMoney responds:

Super Deduper funny

[LL - Fight the Power!]

great work

very inspiring. Keep up the great work.

LeafLock responds:

viva la resistance!

(thx pumpkin <3)

[Fat Dick Balls]

reall not good

but it had mario in it XD

Horsenwelles responds:

thank you

[Demo Reel 2009]

great work

you're a great animator, I will follow your work GUY

Jeinu responds:

thanks MAN

wait